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If you are a writing teacher, use your feedback on students’ papers to point out advanced techniques done correctly. Sometimes students write without realizing that they are doing some cool things in their writing.<\/p>\n

For example, here are some comments I have just made on a couple of students’ papers in order to even use grading time as teaching time:<\/p>\n

*Superb compound-complex sentence!
*Another great appositive
*Love this CS; CA, CS
*Thanks for remembering that periods always go inside closing quotation marks in the US
*Great details…I appreciate you putting at least two pieces of information in each sentence!
*Love this informative opening paragraph with its strong link to the body and its MYSTERY!
*Triff!
*Cool vocab in this sentence!
*Perfect personification! \ud83d\ude42
*Love this allieration!<\/p>\n

Happy teaching, learning, and grammar today, LL friends!<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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